I am decideing which book idea of mine I want to write. Which plot is better?

Posted under Hidden Cameras Girls Bathroom by admin on Friday 5 February 2010

This is Plot #1

Rome Kale Haltfinger takes a trip to Rome, with his parents Kelly Ann Meyburger Haltfinger and George Kale Haltfinger. He thought something fun would happen, but nothing does.
Rome is forced to go with Kelly and George to a museum. At the museum, Rome makes a wish to a statue, of a beautiful Roman princess names Romance, that he would get some adventure. But, as usual, nothing happens. (Romance actually hears this and everything else)
That night at the museum, Romance wakes up from where her bones were displayed. It is not that far from closing time, so she says she was in a bathroom to the security guard. Then, she is out to find Rome.
She travels all night, in a long bold white princess dress that was recovered from when she was alive. And about sometime during lunch she finds Rome.
Rome thinks he is crazy. She looks really familiar, but he doesn’t know from where. Rome slips away from his parents and goes to talk to her.
Romance doesn’t want to tell him the news right away. So she asks him out for dinner. They go to dinner, and he pays. (Even though she offers with gold.)
Rome and Romance start to fall in love. They go on a lovely date to see a bunch of fire crackers. They love it, but Romance decides it is time to tell him who she really is.
They make another date, and they are just going on a long walk.
Romance tells him everything, and she tells him the power he has with wishes. She finally gets him to believe her, but he tells her “I have to leave Rome soon. Collage is starting.”
The sad scene. Rome kissed Romance, and Romance pulls away crying. She says “You can’t leave me here.” And she says “I have never cried before.” Romance takes off running.
Rome does not want to ever leave Romance. So even though he doesn’t know if he will ever see Romance again, he talks to his parents about popping the big question (to marry her). They are upset but they let him.
Rome goes to the old castle in Rome. He then wishes that she would come to that place, but she is already there. She is waiting for him.
He goes to pull out the ring, but she stops him and says “I know the desires of your heart.” She kisses him, and says “Yes, I will marry you.”
But she also says “You are not going to send me back?” and she tells of her past at the castle. She asks “Do you still love me?” And Rome says “Of course.” They kiss again

Plot #2

Victoria meets The Young Brothers. It is love at first sight between her and Moe.
Victoria goes on a date with Moe.
Victoria brings Moe’s whole family over to meet her family (after being forced).
Rick and Gloria really hit it off. (Devin and Gloria become great friends.)
Gloria + Rick and Victoria + Moe go on a double date.
But Gloria falls head over heals for Moe.
Moe feels the same way about Gloria, but he does not know how to get rid of Victoria.
They fall in love. They sneak around.
Moe breaks Victoria’s heart.
Moe meets another girl, and Gloria sees him cheat on her.
Devastated, Gloria goes to Devin, crying.
And Devin tries to help, by telling her to break up with him (and she does).
It goes in a magazine “Did one girl really tackle two of the three Young’s?” And Gloria sees how Moe admits he still loves her. She does not know how to handle.
Gloria goes and talks to Moe. Moe says he wants to be with her, but he hides the lies of having another girl friend.
He then dumps her, and she asks why. He says “He doesn’t get dumped by girls, and that he only said that stuff because he wanted to look sweet in the magazine.”
Gloria goes to Devin. Devin admits how he feels about Gloria, and Gloria feels bad. Dating all three brothers, but she goes out with him.
Once again she is in the magazine. But she tries to tell about Moe, but the magazine does not believe her. They say it’s just another “Crazy Ex-girlfriend”.
So she gets the proof, by talking to him. But she really has a camera on her hat. She gets all the proof she needs. And Moe goes down.
Devin and she have a happy ever after…
They may not be the best but Rome+Romance is compleatly original. So you don’t have to be rude.

Congratulations on thinly disguising The Jonas Brothers in the second plot.

Moe=Joe
Devin=Kevin
Rick=Nick

I personally don’t like either plot. First one moves along too fast, and second is just too confusing and cliche.

4 Comments »

  1. 1st one
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    Comment by Peyton C — February 5, 2010 @ 9:47 pm

  2. Congratulations on thinly disguising The Jonas Brothers in the second plot.

    Moe=Joe
    Devin=Kevin
    Rick=Nick

    I personally don’t like either plot. First one moves along too fast, and second is just too confusing and cliche.
    References :

    Comment by shake_it_up2008655 — February 5, 2010 @ 10:32 pm

  3. …how old are you…

    seriously… devin, moe and rick… the young brothers… how original…

    and rome goes to rome and falls in love with romance…

    write them both… get your yayas out… and then sudmit them to fanifiction.net…
    References :

    Comment by lyndastarian — February 5, 2010 @ 11:03 pm

  4. *flips coin*

    go with #1
    References :

    Comment by Argyr — February 5, 2010 @ 11:18 pm

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